Electric Love Chapter 5: An Unexpected Result

Hey anyone out there!

After rereading my last four chapters, I have found some major (in my eyes at least) typos and grammar errors.

-.-;

So in order to make sure that it won't happen in the future, I'm going to begin shoving them off to a friend to spell check the life out of it.

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Or just post them anyway.

"What's going on here?"

Oh right.  That's what Sparkle meant.  After hearing the familiar voice, the three of us turn to find a guilty looking Beah and a somewhat awestruck trainer.

"Pen, I'll repeat.  What's going on here and where's Stan?"

Mel looked at us one by one until she reached Stan.  With each step she took, I felt my heart explode.  Would she get angry?  We didn't mean to!  What about Stan?  How will she react?!  And before I knew it, Mel was standing in front of Stan.  She reluctantly reached her arm out towards the Staravia.  At this time, Beah was running over towards Sparkle and me.

"Beah!" I hissed "What happened?  You were supposed to warn us if Mel was coming!"

"I know but she saw me first and I got pulled into helping her with the groceries." Beah said while pointing over to a couple of bags.

Sparkle then jumped between us and said "No time to argue guys!  Look!"

We all looked towards Mel and Stan.  He jumped onto her arm like he did when he was a Starly.  Mel then pulled out Stan's ball and made him return.  Looking at the ball, she then released him and looked at us with a serious look.

"Sigh…"

Did she just… sigh?

"Guys!  I wanted to see the evolution too!" she cried out.

What?  That's all?

We all had a confused look until she had Stan hop on her arm again.

"Look, I knew that Stan was close to evolution.  I thought that we could have a nice lunch first and then get him in a battle.  But…" she then looked to us "it looks like you guys beat me to it." She added with a smile.

"Stan.  Could you try flying as high as you can go?"

And following her instruction, Stan took off and flew straight up.  He went so far up.  Much farther than he could have as a Starly.

"Good job!  Come back down now!" yelled Mel as she held her arm back out.

And as if rehearsed, Stan landed perfectly on her arm.  I must say, his speed is impressive.

"Since Stan already evolved, let's get everyone up to par.  But first, lunch!"

It's been two hours since our extensive training began.  Mel was in the middle of a battle with Beah and a wild Shinx.

"Beah!  Use Rollout!"

Sparkle, Stan and I were watching with deep interest.  Mel said before the battle that one more battle for Beah should do it.  We all wanted to see what Beah would evolve into.

"He's weak Beah!  Use Tackle!"

And with that final Tackle attack, the wild Shinx fell.  At that moment, we all cheered and ran toward Beah to see if that battle was enough to get him to evolve.

"Stand back everyone!  Give Beah some room!" Mel ordered.

Just then, Beah looked just like Stan did earlier that day.  He began to slightly glow and twitched periodically.  His short stubby tail grew twice the size.  Beah got off the ground with his forelegs and sat up right.  When the glowing ended, we stood looking at Beah in his new form.  Just then, Mel whipped out her light blue Pokedex.

It read "Bibarel- the Beaver Pokemon.  A river dammed by Bibarel will never overflow its banks, which is appreciated by people nearby."

When reading more about Beah's new form, Beah, for some strange reason, ran over towards the small pond and began to drink water.  I don't remember him being that thirsty before.

"Makes sense." said Mel while looking up from her Pokedex and towards Beah "He's part Water type now."

Really?!  So that's why Mel needed Beah and I for the next gym.  She must have planned this from the start.

"Beah!  Could you get over here?  I want to teach you a new move."

Beah came walking over and looked up at our trainer with curious eyes.

"Now that you're a Bibarel, I want you to learn the move Water Gun.  It will really help us in the next gym.  Come on Beah; let's go practice on those trees."

Mel looked over at the rest of us who had nothing to do and said "Pen!  Sparkle!  I want you two to spar with each other but only physical moves.  I don't want Pen to faint because of your Spark attack, Sparkle!  Stan!  I want you to watch over them."

And with that, she went off with Beah to practice.

Sparkle looked at them walk off and then said "Well, let's get started then Pen."

"Right!"

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I didn't want everyone evolving in one chapter.  What I plan on doing is having each one get their own chapter but I'm trying hard to remember how I played through Platinum.

*rubs temples*

In the next chapter, we should be in Oreburgh.  If not, then this will be one long fic.