Electric Love Chapter 5: An Unexpected ResultHey anyone out there!After rereading my last four chapters, I have found some major (in my eyes at least) typos and grammar errors.-.-;So in order to make sure that it won't happen in the future, I'm going to begin shoving them off to a friend to spell check the life out of it.Or just post them anyway."What's going on here?"Oh right. That's what Sparkle meant. After hearing the familiar voice, the three of us turn to find a guilty looking Beah and a somewhat awestruck trainer."Pen, I'll repeat. What's going on here and where's Stan?"Mel looked at us one by one until she reached Stan. With each step she took, I felt my heart explode. Would she get angry? We didn't mean to! What about Stan? How will she react?! And before I knew it, Mel was standing in front of Stan. She reluctantly reached her arm out towards the Staravia. At this time, Beah was running
Electric Love Chapter 4: ChangesChapter 4!Here is I guess development. (In Pokemon eyes at least)After coming back from Jubilife City's Pokemon Center, Mel and I returned back to Route 203. Since it was around lunch time, Mel decided to let everyone out for lunch time. We stopped by a clearing near a small pond and decided to stop there. Mel released everyone else and told me to watch everyone while she went off to find some berries."Hey Stan!" I exclaimed when Mel was out of site "Great job on that battle! It was amazing!""Huh? Oh that's gr-great." He replied but not in his usual tone.Concerned, the other three of us gathered near Stan and tried to question him."What's wrong Stan? Are you feeling sick? Should I go find Mel?" Beah said trying his best not to panic."Maybe it was the battle?" wondered Sparkle."That doesn't make sense." I added "Stan won. He should be feeling great right now."